Hi Joe,

I would like to suggest to consider the wording similar to what we have for 
other modules

+/**
+ * This module contains the sub-packages in the W3C Document Object Model 
(DOM) API 
+ * that are not part of the Jave SE API. 
+ *
+ * @since 9
+ */

Perhaps change to:

Defines the subset of the  W3C Document Object Model (DOM) API that is not part 
of the Java SE API

HTH

Best
Lance

> On Mar 7, 2017, at 1:36 PM, huizhe wang <huizhe.w...@oracle.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Please review a module description for jdk.xml.dom.
> 
> JBS: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8175830
> webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~joehw/jdk9/8175830/webrev/
> 
> Thanks,
> Joe

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