Thanks Lance.  Updated.

http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~joehw/jdk9/8175830/webrev/src/jdk.xml.dom/share/classes/module-info.java.udiff.html

-Joe

On 3/7/2017 10:45 AM, Lance Andersen wrote:
Hi Joe,

I would like to suggest to consider the wording similar to what we have for other modules

+/**
+ * This module contains the sub-packages in the W3C Document Object Model (DOM) API
+ * that are not part of the Jave SE API.
+ *
+ * @since 9
+ */

Perhaps change to:

Defines the subset of the W3C Document Object Model (DOM) API that is not part of the Java SE API

HTH

Best
Lance

On Mar 7, 2017, at 1:36 PM, huizhe wang <huizhe.w...@oracle.com <mailto:huizhe.w...@oracle.com>> wrote:

Hi,

Please review a module description for jdk.xml.dom.

JBS: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8175830
webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~joehw/jdk9/8175830/webrev/ <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Ejoehw/jdk9/8175830/webrev/>

Thanks,
Joe

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