Thanks for your review Alan.

I believe I’ve addressed your concerns in this latest webrev/javadoc:
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/webrev.08/ 
<http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/webrev.08/>
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/javadoc.08/api/java.base/java/util/HexFormat.html
 
<http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/javadoc.08/api/java.base/java/util/HexFormat.html>


> On 11 Dec 2018, at 13:04, Alan Bateman <alan.bate...@oracle.com> wrote:
> 
> On 08/12/2018 01:18, Vincent Ryan wrote:
>> Here’s the latest version that addresses all the current open issues:
>> 
>> webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/webrev.07/ 
>> <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/webrev.07/>
>> javadoc: 
>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/javadoc.07/api/java.base/java/util/HexFormat.html
>>  
>> <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~vinnie/8170769/javadoc.07/api/java.base/java/util/HexFormat.html>
>> 
>> CSR: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/CCC-8170769 
>> <https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/CCC-8170769>
>> 
> I read through the latest javadoc corresponding to webrev.07.
> 
> Overall I think it looks very good except for dumpAsStream(ByteBuffer, 
> fromIndex, toIndex, chunkSize, Formatter) as it's not clear if fromIndex is 
> from the buffer position or an absolute index. If the former then there are a 
> couple of other issues. I see Roger has touched on the advancement of the 
> buffer position to its limit which isn't right unless all remaining bytes in 
> the  buffer are consumer. There is also an issue with the exception as 
> attempting to consume beyond the limit is a BufferUnderflowException. It 
> might be simpler to replace this method with a dumpAsStream(ByteBuffer, 
> chunkSize, Formatter) that can lazily (rather than eagerly) consume the 
> remaining bytes. Additional overloads could be added in the future if needed.
> 
> dumpAsStream(InputStream) specifies "On return, the input stream will be at 
> end-of-stream" but I assume this isn't right as the method is lazy.
> 
> The 3-arg dumpAsStream doesn't specify the exception/behavior for when 
> chunkSize is <= 0.
> 
> fromString(CharSequence) may need clarification on how it behaves when the CS 
> is a CharBuffer. Does it consume all the remaining chars in the buffer so its 
> position be advanced to the limit? The 3-arg version is also not clear on 
> this point.
> 
> In Formatter interface it may be useful to expand the description of the 
> "offset" parameter as readers may not immediately understand that it's just 
> an input for the formatted string rather than a real offset, an example might 
> help. It also doesn't say if the offset can be specified as <= 0L or not.
> 
> A minor comment is that several places refer to a byte array as a "byte 
> buffers. Is this deliberate or can these be replaced with "byte array" to 
> avoid confusion. Another minor comment is that one of the dumpAsStream 
> methods is missing @throws NPE - maybe they should all be removed and 
> replaced with a statement in the class description.
> 
> -Alan

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