Hi Jim,

The nature of the problem should be apparent from the summary and problem descriptions.

The CSR/diff does not identify the methods modified.

The new 3rd bullet seems more like a consequence of the first 2 actions, not an independent step.
The word 'implies' seems out of place in a specification of behavior.
I think you can drop 'this/thus implies' without loss of clarity or intent.

Is it significant that the first change spells out \n and \r and the second
refers to 'line terminator'?

Roger


On 1/7/20 7:43 AM, Jim Laskey wrote:
Please review this CSR to clarify the javadoc details of String::indent 
(proposed by Andrew Leonard).

webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~jlaskey/8230800/webrev.00/index.html 
<http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~jlaskey/8230800/webrev.00/index.html>
csr: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8236688
jbs: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8230800

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