> On 15 May 2020, at 16:53, Roger Riggs <roger.ri...@oracle.com> wrote: > > Hi Pavel, > > No problem with the "with" -> "by" changes. > > javax/naming/NameNotFoundException.java: 55 > "initialized" -> "are initialized" > > java/util/jar/Attributes.java:594 > The period was in the correct place. > The second sentence is a separate comment about the use (non-use).
I considered that initially, but then saw how it was used on the adjacent field: /** * {@code Name} object for {@code Extension-List} manifest attribute * used for the extension mechanism that is no longer supported. */ public static final Name EXTENSION_LIST; Would you suggest making a similar fix here? > "used for the extension mechanism that is no longer supported." > > Would read better as: > "This name is obsolete, the extension mechanism is no longer supported." > > $.02, Roger > > > On 5/15/20 10:00 AM, Daniel Fuchs wrote: >> Hi Pavel, >> >> This looks good to me - but English is not my native language ;-) >> >> cheers, >> >> -- daniel >> >> On 15/05/2020 13:35, Pavel Rappo wrote: >>> Hello, >>> >>> Please review this trivial change for >>> https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8245111: >>> >>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~prappo/8245111/webrev.00/ >>> >>> In addition to fixing the main issue, this includes a blanket change from >>> "followed with" to "followed by" as the latter seemed idiomatic to me. >>> >>> -Pavel >>> >> >