Hi Pavel
> On May 15, 2020, at 12:34 PM, Roger Riggs <roger.ri...@oracle.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Pavel,
>
> Yes, I think that would be an improvement.
> But its a slippery slope beyond what you originally observed and wanted to
> fix.
I understand why you want to fix this. When you look at the rest of the field
descriptions, that will now show as the only field without a period in the
description.
Not sure what the best answer is.
The rest is fine, this is the only puzzler :-)
Best
Lance
>
> Thanks, Roger
>
>
> On 5/15/20 11:59 AM, Pavel Rappo wrote:
>>> On 15 May 2020, at 16:53, Roger Riggs <roger.ri...@oracle.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi Pavel,
>>>
>>> No problem with the "with" -> "by" changes.
>>>
>>> javax/naming/NameNotFoundException.java: 55
>>> "initialized" -> "are initialized"
>>>
>>> java/util/jar/Attributes.java:594
>>> The period was in the correct place.
>>> The second sentence is a separate comment about the use (non-use).
>> I considered that initially, but then saw how it was used on the adjacent
>> field:
>>
>> /**
>> * {@code Name} object for {@code Extension-List} manifest attribute
>> * used for the extension mechanism that is no longer supported.
>> */
>> public static final Name EXTENSION_LIST;
>>
>> Would you suggest making a similar fix here?
>>
>>> "used for the extension mechanism that is no longer supported."
>>>
>>> Would read better as:
>>> "This name is obsolete, the extension mechanism is no longer supported."
>>>
>>> $.02, Roger
>>>
>>>
>>> On 5/15/20 10:00 AM, Daniel Fuchs wrote:
>>>> Hi Pavel,
>>>>
>>>> This looks good to me - but English is not my native language ;-)
>>>>
>>>> cheers,
>>>>
>>>> -- daniel
>>>>
>>>> On 15/05/2020 13:35, Pavel Rappo wrote:
>>>>> Hello,
>>>>>
>>>>> Please review this trivial change for
>>>>> https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8245111:
>>>>>
>>>>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~prappo/8245111/webrev.00/
>>>>>
>>>>> In addition to fixing the main issue, this includes a blanket change from
>>>>> "followed with" to "followed by" as the latter seemed idiomatic to me.
>>>>>
>>>>> -Pavel
>>>>>
>
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