On Wed, 21 May 2025 10:43:12 GMT, David Beaumont <d...@openjdk.org> wrote:

>> Adding read-only support to ZipFileSystem.
>> 
>> The new `accessMode` environment property allows for readOnly and readWrite 
>> values, and ensures that the requested mode is consistent with what's 
>> returned.
>> 
>> This involved a little refactoring to ensure that "read only" state was set 
>> initially and only unset at the end of initialization if appropriate.
>> 
>> By making 2 methods return values (rather than silently set non-final fields 
>> as a side effect) it's now clear in what order fields are initialized and 
>> which are final (sadly there are still non-final fields, but only a split of 
>> this class into two types can fix that, since determining multi-jar support 
>> requires reading the file system).
>
> David Beaumont has updated the pull request incrementally with one additional 
> commit since the last revision:
> 
>   Tweaking exact wording.

src/jdk.zipfs/share/classes/module-info.java line 279:

> 277:  *       <ul>
> 278:  *           <li>
> 279:  *               If no value is set, the file system is created 
> <em>read-write</em>

created -> created as

I think it might be better as 

> If no value is specified, the file system is created as ....

src/jdk.zipfs/share/classes/module-info.java line 289:

> 287:  *               <em>read-only</em> file system requires the underlying 
> ZIP file to
> 288:  *               already exist.
> 289:  *               Specifying {@code create} as {@code true} and {@code 
> accessMode} as

> Specifying {@code  create} 

You should make this clear that it is the 'create property '

src/jdk.zipfs/share/classes/module-info.java line 291:

> 289:  *               Specifying {@code create} as {@code true} and {@code 
> accessMode} as
> 290:  *               {@code readOnly} will cause an {@code 
> IllegalArgumentException}
> 291:  *               to be thrown when creating the ZIP file system.

I 'think' this should be "cause a" or "result in a" for the usages  of "cause 
an" based on how the phrase is used

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/25178#discussion_r2101259671
PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/25178#discussion_r2101262569
PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/25178#discussion_r2101257012

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