Hello Murray, Thank you for your review! Please find my answers below.
On Thu, Oct 22, 2020 at 8:44 AM Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker < [email protected]> wrote: > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-cose-x509-07: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cose-x509/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I would like to add my thanks to Jim Schaad for this document, and for all > of > his other contributions to the IETF. > > -- > > Section 1 includes a GitHub URL where the reader can find examples. Is > this > acceptable as a permanent reference? > [IP]: Currently that reference has been removed as there were no examples related to this draft. Otherwise I would have had to check what exactly is our policy about this as the repository is controlled by the COSE WG, but github not. Section 2: > > * "... will evaluate and process of X.509 certificates ..." -- remove "of"? > [IP]: Done. > * "... and be configured use ..." -- add "to"? > [IP]: Done. > > * The first paragraph of the "x5t" bullet seems to have a couple of > sentences > smashed together at the end. > [IP]: I tried to make it easier to read [1], please let me know if that is what you meant. > * Has the note about the AD Review comments in this section been resolved? > [IP]: My understanding is that unless there are new comments on the topic, for now we just mandate the support of 'SHA-256'. [1]: https://github.com/cose-wg/X509/commit/515aa080642ab13710429f02245c9c51c297e306
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