I would like feedback on my cover letter to potential investors. Downtown Fort Wayne is in the critical crossroads of revitalization. In the past three years there has been a strong momentum to add new restaurants, sports facilities, small retailers and technology businesses have been added the current mix. In that same time frame, the central core of Fort Wayne has lost a number of entities, including accounting firms, law practices and investment corporations. Additional private firms may relocate due to today’s technological advances. Therefore in this frequent shift of individuals within the central core, there must be a strong focus on building a critical mass to redensify the area and allow for sustainability.
OurSpace Fort Wayne will be coworking site, in downtown, that is planned to to open in Spring, 2009. Coworking is a movement to create cafe-like community/collaboration spaces for entrepreneurs, innovators, developers, writers and others. Although no specific site has been selected, it is believed that the workspace will have room for 30 members per day; a minimum of 45 individuals will use the site per week. Along with a space for work, members will have access to a lounge/kitchen, private offices and conference facilities. To ensure that OurSpace is successful, your assistance is needed. OurSpace will developed with funds from private investors who believe in utilizing innovation, ingenuity and creativy to revitalize and build critical mass in Fort Wayne’s central core . In addition, OurSpace is currently seeking potential members that would benefit from the space’s offerings. Finally, OurSpace is procuring partnerships that will assist members grow and sustain their business, balance work and life and maintain a active lifestyle. Enclosed in this packet of information is an executive summary of the plan and membership rates. A full business plan is available upon request. To obtain additional information or a business plan please contact Jodi Dean, OurSpace founder, at number. --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Coworking" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/coworking?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
