Nice start. Quick 2 cents: Provide a list of people with "letters of intent" to join such a space.
Good luck! Julie Duryea owner, souk 322 nw 6th avenue, suite 200 portland, oregon 97209 p | 503.517.6900 f | 503.517.6901 skype julieduryea http://www.soukllc.com tweet soukportland On Oct 8, 1:17 pm, "Allie Allie" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hello, > > I'd like to suggest that you develop a marketing plan first, if you haven't > already. If you have, what this letter needs to reflect is how your idea of > coworking space fulfills a new market need. The letter below will be > unclear to anyone who isn't familiar with the concept. > > -Allyson Saad > > On Wed, Oct 8, 2008 at 3:07 PM, Karen Origlio <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > Hi Jodi, > > > I have some experience editing and can provide feedback. > > I'll send you suggestions in a Word doc off-list. > > > Congrats on your exciting plans! > > > Karen > > > On Oct 3, 12:29 pm, JDean <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > I would like feedback on my cover letter to potential investors. > > > > Downtown Fort Wayne is in the critical crossroads of revitalization. > > > In the past three years there has been a strong momentum to add new > > > restaurants, sports facilities, small retailers and technology > > > businesses have been added the current mix. In that same time frame, > > > the central core of Fort Wayne has lost a number of entities, > > > including accounting firms, law practices and investment corporations. > > > Additional private firms may relocate due to today's technological > > > advances. Therefore in this frequent shift of individuals within the > > > central core, there must be a strong focus on building a critical mass > > > to redensify the area and allow for sustainability. > > > > OurSpace Fort Wayne will be coworking site, in downtown, that is > > > planned to to open in Spring, 2009. Coworking is a movement to > > > create cafe-like community/collaboration spaces for entrepreneurs, > > > innovators, developers, writers and others. Although no specific site > > > has been selected, it is believed that the workspace will have room > > > for 30 members per day; a minimum of 45 individuals will use the site > > > per week. Along with a space for work, members will have access to a > > > lounge/kitchen, private offices and conference facilities. > > > > To ensure that OurSpace is successful, your assistance is needed. > > > OurSpace will developed with funds from private investors who believe > > > in utilizing innovation, ingenuity and creativy to revitalize and > > > build critical mass in Fort Wayne's central core . In addition, > > > OurSpace is currently seeking potential members that would benefit > > > from the space's offerings. Finally, OurSpace is procuring > > > partnerships that will assist members grow and sustain their business, > > > balance work and life and maintain a active lifestyle. > > > > Enclosed in this packet of information is an executive summary of the > > > plan and membership rates. A full business plan is available upon > > > request. To obtain additional information or a business plan please > > > contact Jodi Dean, OurSpace founder, at number. --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Coworking" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/coworking?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
