El 2010. 01. 04. 22:28, Doug Barton escribió:
Gavin Atkinson wrote:
On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote:
dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
Log:
Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script
did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an
unexpanded example.
Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup.
<para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service
earlier all ports scripts should use
- <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service
+ <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service
runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory.
This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is
better than any rewording I can come up with.
Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the
period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box,
so it looks like this:
I would suggest the following:
<para>Unless there is a good reason to start the service
earlier all ports scripts should use the following:</para>
<programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>
<para>If the service ...</para>
Cheers,
--
Gabor Kovesdan
FreeBSD Volunteer
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