On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Gabor Kovesdan wrote: > El 2010. 01. 04. 22:28, Doug Barton escribi?: > > Gavin Atkinson wrote: > > > > > On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote: > > > > > > > dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC > > > > > > > > Modified files: > > > > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml > > > > Log: > > > > Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script > > > > did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an > > > > unexpanded example. > > > > > > > > Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup. > > > > > > > > > > > <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service > > > > earlier all ports scripts should use > > > > - <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service > > > > + <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service > > > > runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory. > > > > > > > This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is > > > better than any rewording I can come up with. > > > > > Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the > > period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box, > > so it looks like this: > > > I would suggest the following: > > <para>Unless there is a good reason to start the service > earlier all ports scripts should use the following:</para> > > <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> > > <para>If the service ...</para>
I hadn't looked at the rendered output before now, I think Gabor's suggestion is probably the best answer. Thanks, Gavin _______________________________________________ [email protected] mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"
