Olafur & Warren,

I realize that WGLC formally ended on Friday, but I'll note that I have read 
these two documents and I didn't really much beyond comments that Stephane and 
Viktor have already made. I support the documents moving ahead subject to the 
comments that have been sent around.

In https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dane-srv-08  I have these two 
comments:

1. A nitpick where the abstract says:
----
   The DANE specification (RFC 6698) describes how to use TLSA resource
   records in the DNS to associate a server's host name with its TLS
   certificate, where the association is secured with DNSSEC.  However,
   application protocols that use SRV records (RFC 2782) to indirectly
   name the target server host names for a service domain cannot apply
   the rules from RFC 6698.
----

I think there is a singular/plural mismatch here.  I think it should be "to 
indirectly name the target server host **name** for a service domain"

2. Where is 'Certificate Usage "DANE-EE"' defined?  I see it referenced here in 
section 4.2 but I don't find any reference to "DANE-EE" in RFC 6698 or find a 
definition in this document?

In https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dane-smtp-with-dane-13 nothing leapt 
out at me in terms of comments, although I will admit I did not read it as 
thoroughly as the SRV one.  I will note that DANE-EE *is* used and defined here 
in this document.

My 2 cents,
Dan


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On Dec 3, 2014, at 11:00 PM, Paul Hoffman 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
 wrote:

I have read these two documents and they seem fine. I'm sure there will be 
significant comments in IETF Last Call from folks in Apps Area, both about the 
use of SRV and SMTP, and possibly technical changes based on those, but as a WG 
product, both of these seem fine.

--Paul Hoffman
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