"efficient to use" sounds fine.
As for this:
"This smartness lets you respond to changing demands in ways that
would otherwise not be possible. Learn more about spontaneous branches
with darcs."
My suggestion:
"Darcs lets you respond to changing demands in ways that are tough to
do in other systems, such as the ability to create ad-hoc branches."
On 8/31/06, Juliusz Chroboczek <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Applied to the unstable branch, by Mark's request.
I fully agree with Eric -- the ``Hello, I'm'' sounds wrong to European ears.
There are three things I dislike: ``smartness'', ``spontaneous branches''
and ``efficient to use''. Help from native speakers welcome.
Juliusz
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