Lars -
On 2008-2-27, at 10:05, ext Gorry Fairhurst wrote:
This note starts the WG Last-Call for comments for the WG document
named
below:
TCP Friendly Rate Control (TFRC): Protocol Specification
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis-05.txt
I'm trying to do my AD reviews during WGLC time. For this document,
that has actually happened.
Summary: Basically good to go. Needs a few tweaks that introduce
RFC2119 terms in order to make it a bit clearer what implementors
should be doing. Suggestions for that in the detailed comments below.
Many thanks for the detailed feedback!
I have made all of the changes you suggested (including
the one in the second email message), and posted the draft
with the changes at:
http://www.icir.org/floyd/papers/draft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis-06a.txt
http://www.icir.org/floyd/papers/draft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis-06a.pdf
- Sally
http://www.icir.org/floyd/
