Package: boot-floppies
Version: kernel
Architecture: i386
model: PII
RAM: 128MB
SCSI: Adaptec
Network card:
In CD1 "Debian GNU/Linux 2.2 "Potato" - test-cycle-2 i386"
french doc: "Installer Debian Linux 2.2 sur Intel x86" version 2.2.15, 06
June,2000
I have found some mistakes:
- Page 10, Chapter 2.5.3, the line containing the ftp url does not fit in the
page and is
truncated
- Page 24, Chapter 5.3 the line containing the http url
//http.us.debian.org/debian...
does not fit in the page and is truncated
- Page 26, Chapter 5.3 the line describing fdisk.txt and cfdisk.txt does not fit
in the page.
- Page 32, chapter 6.1 the end of the line speaking about IBP PS/1 does not
fit in the page: "hd=cylindres,t�tes,secteurs."
- Page 34, chapter 6.6 the line containing the email address
"[EMAIL PROTECTED]"
does not fit in the page.
- Page 34, chapter 6.6 some lines when describing a bug report does not fit in
the page:
the line that contains "scsi: nom de votre controleur..."
the line that contains "cd-rom: mod�le de votre cdrom ..."
the line that contains "carte r�seau: ..."
- Page 42, chapter 7.16: "Le moment de v�rit�":
.In case of installing from a CDROM, you must say to the user to eject the
floppy and
the cdrom
.you must say something about MD5 menu
.you must say something about Shadow passwords menu: the chapter 7.19 is
misplaced
in the document, because Debian installer asked to me about shadow password
before
asking for a root password.
- Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text: replace
"Ensuite, vous allez arriv�" by "Ensuite, vous allez arriver"
- Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text: replace
"souvenez de passer l'�tape" by "souvenez vous de passer l'�tape"
- Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text, in the
line containing "Sinon, vous pouvez quitter dselect et reprendre plus tard" on
the
word "tard"
and in the next sentence: "une fois que vous aurez r�cup�r� les paquets Debian
sur
votre syst�me" in the word "sur"
- Page 45, chapter 7.23, a little mistake in the french text: replace
"diificult�" by "difficult�"
- Page 45, chapter 7.23, le line speaking on "/etc/chatscripts" does not fit in
the page.
- The chapter 7.23 on PPP is misplaced: I have been asked on PPP configuration
after PCMCIA (chapter 7.20)
- A chapter about "Apt configuration" should be written, after the new PPP
chapter.
The chapters order should be: PCMCIA,PPP,Apt configuration
- A big problem: During install, I have never seen a menu for choosing
"Profiles"
Thank you for your good work
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Manuel Segura
Responsable Informatique de l'ESCPI
ESCPI - CNAM
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