The second sentence is a bit of a run-on. How about this:Template: base-config/intro Type: note _Description: Welcome to your new Debian system! This program will now walk you through the process of setting up your newly installed system. It will start with the basics -- time zone selection, setting a root password and adding a user, and then progress to installing additional software to tune this new Debian system to your needs.
This program will now walk you through the process of setting up your
newly installed system. It will start with the basics: time zone selection, setting a root password, and adding a user. Then it will progress to installing additional software to tune your new Debian system to your needs.
Or possibly something less verbose. :-)
Template: base-config/use-ppp Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Use a PPP connection to install the system? This system does not seem to be currently connected to the internet. Even if you plan to install from CD, it is wise to download at least security updates from the internet. . If you have an account on an Internet Services Provider (ISP), and
^^^^^^^^ Should be singular: Internet Service Provider.
Perhaps "your computer" or "this computer" instead of "the computer"?you want to use it during the install, you may configure the PPP service now, and open a PPP connection to your ISP.
Template: base-config/pkgsel Type: select Choices: ${choices} _Description: Software selection method: You can choose more software to be installed to customize the computer
for your particular needs. The following methods are available to select software to install.
PPP should be capitalized; it's an acronym.Template: base-config/menu/pon Type: text _Description: Configure and enable ppp
The rest of debian/templates, as well as apt-setup.templates and tzsetup.templates, looks good.
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