tag 673463 + pending thanks On Fri, 18 May 2012, Francesco Poli (wintermute) wrote: > I hope this may be useful to you, in order to make the chapter even > better than it is currently!
I included some of your fixes and reworded some of the sections that you found unclear. > | Debian is truly an international project: Its developers can be found > > Typo? s/Its/its/ We can have a capital after ":" and ";". It's recommended by the Chicago Manual of Style when you have more than one sentence after those symbols. > | the manager thereof must continue to improve it > > Should it perhaps be s/manager/maintainer/ ? Yes. Cheers, -- Raphaël Hertzog ◈ Debian Developer Get the Debian Administrator's Handbook: → http://debian-handbook.info/get/ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected]
