Package: aptitude-doc-en
Version: 0.4.3-1
Severity: minor

Thanks for a useful manual. A few small bugs from the sarge
version (0.2.15.9) are still present in 0.4.3-1

ch01s01s04.html

<quote>
in the screen shot below, the kaffeine package was selected and + was pushed
</quote>

correction: s/kaffeine/kaffeine-mozilla/


ch02s02s03.html

In the box describing "Reinstall: press L", we have
<quote>
when you quit aptitude or perform an install run for technical
reasons. (essentially,
</quote>

Corrections:

 - insert a comma after "install run" (you don't "perform the install run for
   technical reasons"; the comma is needed for correct grouping)
 - delete full stop after reasons



fulfil or fulfill?

Here in the UK, "fulfil" is the correct spelling.  That will be true
for readers in many parts of the world.  I believe US English accepts
both "fulfil" and "fulfill".  If that is so, you could make the change
s/fulfill/fulfil/ in a couple of places, at least:

ch02s02s02.html:  fulfill the dependency.  These versions can be manipulated
ch02s04s05.html:  <span><b class="command">aptitude</b></span> will 
automatically attempt to fulfill


There is a changelog bug for (unstable) version 0.4.4-1
   - Translation updates: * Basque (Closes: #38973)

Surely 38973 should be 389730 ;-)

http://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?bug=38973
http://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?bug=389730



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