On Sun, Jan 20, 2008 at 04:01:34PM +0100, Jonas Meurer wrote: > On 19/01/2008 Justin Pryzby wrote: > > Hi Jonas > > Hey Justin, > > > > > There's some typos in the documentation; some of these are generated > > > > docs, so the patches can't all be applied simply. > > > > > I appreciate your patch, but i'm not sure whether all changes are really > > > necessary. I'm not a native english speaker, and i don't know whether > > > you are one, > > > > I'm a native speaker. > > > > > If you're really sure about the necessity even of these small changes, > > > then feel free to prove me that i'm wrong ;-) > > > > > > It's not that i really have objections, but rather that some > > > modifications by you sound somewhat strange to me. > > > > I understand and agree that some of these are very minor changes not > > alone worth separate/independant patches. However all of them are > > changes in the right direction. For confirmation, I would suggest to > > ask on -l10n-english. > > I decided to trust in your language skills, and applied all changes ;-) > > Only one question is left: Sometimes you converted one space into two > spaces. Was is done by mistake, or did you intend it? For example: Hi Jonas
Thanks for catching that. The changes in the number of spaces was a mistake due to having vim:tw=70 and rejoining the lines with "J". Two spaces is IMHO preferable but trumped by consistency. > By the way, much of the debian specific cryptsetup documentation is written > by me. If you've some spare time, I would really appreciate proofreading of > the docs. Feel free to redesign complete paragraphs, if necessary. I guess > that I often explain things in a more complicated way than necessary. Okay, I had a look at it. By "debian-specific" do you mean the manpages and docs under /u/s/d/cryptsetup/ ? I found very little to be changed, just: CryptoRoot.HowTo: /you'dd/you'd/ CryptoSwap.HowTo: /your swap own/your swap/ s/reaktivate/reactivate/ Justin -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
