Package: lilo Version: 1:22.8-6.3 Severity: minor Tags: patch X-Debbugs-CC: Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
While updating the German Debconf translation I noticed the following
superflous spaces in your templates:
-"run liloconfig(8) when you complete this process and execute /sbin/lilo "
+"run liloconfig(8) when you complete this process and execute /sbin/lilo "
-"configuration file (/etc/lilo.conf). You must upgrade this path in order to "
+"configuration file (/etc/lilo.conf). You must upgrade this path in order to "
-"run LILO. You can also run liloconfig(8) and get a fresh configuration file."
+"run LILO. You can also run liloconfig(8) and get a fresh configuration file."
-"changes in the usage of the ${liloconf} file. If needed: edit ${liloconf} "
+"changes in the usage of the ${liloconf} file. If needed: edit ${liloconf} "
-"This will result in Linux being booted by default from the hard disk. If "
+"This will result in Linux being booted by default from the hard disk. If "
Please unfuzzy all translations after fixing. If you are unsure, ask
on debian-i18n for advice.
Also we noticed that your template could deserve a review on
debian-l10n-english. As an example consider the following string:
"It was detected that it's necessary to run /sbin/lilo in order to update the "
"new LILO configuration."
IMHO its either "update the LILO configuration" (if you consider the
bitmap in the MBR the actual configuration) or "activate the new LILO
configuration" (this is how I translated it) if the (new) configuration
resides in /etc/lilo.conf and is just transferred to the MBR to become
effective.
I ask you to perform this review during the release cycle of Squeeze
(while the above corrections can be applied immediately if you
properly unfuzzy all translations).
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