On Wed, Feb 10, 2010 at 08:43:48PM +0100, Gerfried Fuchs wrote: > Hi! > > I would suggest to get rid of the first paragraph of the long > description all together, somehow it doesn't make much sense to > duplicate the short description into the long description. :) > > Thanks. :)
Hmmmm. This is a weird one. It's true that the meaning is the same,
but it's not an exact duplicate - the long description is pretty much
taken verbatim from Eric Meyer's S5 webpage, and the first "paragraph"
is actually an explanation for the "S5" name.
Do you think something like the following could work?
--- control (revision 4443)
+++ control (working copy)
@@ -13,8 +13,6 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ucf
Description: A simple HTML-based presentation system
- S5: A Simple Standards-Based Slide Show System
- .
S5 is a slide show format based entirely on XHTML, CSS, and JavaScript.
With one file, you can run a complete slide show and have a
printer-friendly version as well. The markup used for the slides is
@@ -23,3 +21,5 @@
and figure out how to adapt it to their particular needs. Anyone
familiar with CSS can create their own slide show theme. It's totally
simple, and it's totally standards-driven.
+ .
+ The name S5 stands for "a simple standards-based slide show system".
And thanks for taking a look at the s5 package! :)
G'luck,
Peter
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Thit sentence is not self-referential because "thit" is not a word.
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