> W. Martin Borgert called attention to: >> http://www.debian.org/releases/testing/releasenotes
Continued. I'd be using the SVN edition, but I hardly understand the first thing about version control systems... Chapter 5: 5.1.9's checklist isn't quite a grammatical sentence, but you can probably get away with that. 5.2.3 talks about alsa-base configuration needing either hotplug or discover installed. Lenny has no such package as hotplug, and its alsa-base Depends on discover. Stale? 5.6 has some phrasing I'm worried about for a new and different reason: I'm not sure what it means. In the clause "when it is not in use", what is "it"? The computer? Network Manager? NIS client functionality? (It might be easier to guess if the explanation used some clearer description than "not in use".) 5.7 uses "respective" in an un-anglophone way. Substitute "appropriate". But there's also a reference to php4, so please also check whether this whole item is stale. 5.10 has a misplaced apostrophe: "in user's home directories". Plural users, so "in users' home directories". What's this about GTK1.2 being fully maintained? Then why http://wiki.debian.org/Gtk1.2ImlibGnome1Removals ? 6.3 (last paragraph): what's this about "reference cards" in /usr/share/doc/debian? I see no cards here! Does it mean /usr/share/doc/debian/bug-reporting.txt? Appendices: A.1 talks about the package list containing "etch packages" - is that a typo for something like "etch lines"? "etch references"? Now, that was i386/release-notes. How do I check for divergences in other architectures? -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected]
