On 2009-01-26 19:49, Justin B Rye wrote: > 5.1.9's checklist isn't quite a grammatical sentence, but you can > probably get away with that.
If you don't mind, please give me a hint to fix it anyway. > 5.2.3 talks about alsa-base configuration needing either hotplug or > discover installed. Lenny has no such package as hotplug, and its > alsa-base Depends on discover. Stale? Hm, alsa-base conflicts with certain versions of discover, but which Depends do you mean? > 5.6 has some phrasing I'm worried about for a new and different > reason: I'm not sure what it means. In the clause "when it is not > in use", what is "it"? The computer? Network Manager? NIS client > functionality? (It might be easier to guess if the explanation > used some clearer description than "not in use".) Good question. I believe(!), it's "Network Manager". Could people shed light on the issue? > 5.7 uses "respective" in an un-anglophone way. Substitute > "appropriate". But there's also a reference to php4, so please > also check whether this whole item is stale. Removed the whole section. > 5.10 has a misplaced apostrophe: "in user's home directories". > Plural users, so "in users' home directories". What's this about > GTK1.2 being fully maintained? Then why > http://wiki.debian.org/Gtk1.2ImlibGnome1Removals ? I believe(!), everything but the last paragraph from this section can be removed. > 6.3 (last paragraph): what's this about "reference cards" in > /usr/share/doc/debian? I see no cards here! Does it mean > /usr/share/doc/debian/bug-reporting.txt? Mystic. No idea. Seems to be in the release notes since long time. Maybe "reference documentation"? > A.1 talks about the package list containing "etch packages" - is > that a typo for something like "etch lines"? "etch references"? Changed to "references to etch". OK? > Now, that was i386/release-notes. How do I check for divergences in > other architectures? You can now build the release notes with architecture=all, which is just a pseudonym for including all conditional text: $ make txt LINGUA=en architecture=all Thanks again for your help! -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected]
