Hi Justin, Applied, up to:
On Thu, Nov 30, 2017 at 10:46:50AM +0000, Justin B Rye wrote: > Vincent McIntyre wrote: > > Joost van Baal-Ilić wrote: > > > +<p>Instead of <i>runlevels</i>, as used on traditional [...] > > > + > > > +<p>Service file <tt>/lib/systemd/rc.local.service</tt> provides an easy > > > way to > > > > concept: we seem to be using italics for those > > > > +<p>The <i>service file</i> <tt>/lib/systemd/rc.local.service</tt> > > provides an easy way to > > Uh, there is no such file, at least on my system, and this seems to be > talking as if admins were meant to create it in /lib/systemd/. Don't > local modifications go in /etc/systemd/? Wouldn't users need lots > more help to be able to create a working .service file from scratch? > > > > +run customized scripts in the file <tt>/etc/rc.local</tt> after boot-up, > > > +similar to what's offered on Debian systems running System-V style init. > > > +Beware: this script will fail if it has interaction to the console such > > > as > > > > +Beware: this script will fail if it tries to interact with the console, > > such as > > > > > +asking for a user password or if it tries to clear the screen.</p> > > Make that > asking for a user password or trying to clear the screen.</p> > > > > + > > > +<p>You can check the status of any service by the command > > > + > > > + <example>systemctl status package.service</example> > > > + > > > +.</p> > > > + > > > +<p>For more information on systemd for Debian, see <nurl > > > > Typo?: > > +<p>For more information on systemd for Debian, see <url > > > > > +id="https://wiki.debian.org/systemd";>. > > > + > > > + > > > +<sect id="sysvinit">And how about Debian and traditional System V > > > init</sect> > > > + > > > + other ways of booting?</sect> > > What's going on with this sentence? So will review rest of your comments soonish. Thanks a lot! Bye, Joost
