Neil Castelino wrote: > I am helping maintain the ejabberd package and was hoping to get someone > to quickly proofread the changes that I made to the template and let me > know if it's alright before I ask for translations. Thank you!
Okay - thanks for providing the actual template for easy diffing! > Template: ejabberd/hostname > Type: string > Default: localhost > _Description: Host name for this Jabber server: > Please enter a host name for this Jabber server (lowercase). > . > If you would like to configure multiple hostnames for this server, you will > have to do so manually in /etc/ejabberd/ejabberd.yml after installation. This says "host name" twice and "hostnames" once. In principle "hostname" is a technical term regulated by RFCs while "host name" might just mean any name a host is known by. Assuming that you don't actually mean "fully qualified domain name", I'd recommend standardising on "hostname" (to match "username" below). (And couldn't it just quietly normalise the string to lowercase behind the scenes?) > Template: ejabberd/user > Type: string > _Description: Jabber server administrator username: > Please provide the name of an account to administrate the ejabberd server. > After the installation of ejabberd you can use this account to log in with > any > Jabber client to do administrative tasks or go to > https://${hostname}:5280/admin/ and log in with this account to enter the > admin > interface. That's a bit hard to follow, because the "or" is only offering an alternative to the "with any Jabber client" part, not the "use this account to log in [...] to do administrative tasks" part (which is true either way). And I assume it's saying that the second alternative is using any web browser... if so, make it: After the installation of ejabberd, you can log in to this account using either any Jabber client or a web browser pointed at the administrative https://${hostname}:5280/admin/ interface. > . > You only need to enter the username part here (such as ${user}), but > the full Jabber ID (such as ${user}@${hostname}) is required to > access the ejabberd web interface. > . > Please leave this field empty if you don't want to create an > administrator account automatically. > > Template: ejabberd/password > Type: password > _Description: Jabber server administrator password: > Please enter the password for the administrative user. > > Template: ejabberd/verify > Type: password > _Description: Re-enter password to verify: > Please enter the same administrator password again to verify that you have > typed it > correctly. > > Template: ejabberd/nomatch > Type: error > _Description: Password input error > The two passwords you entered did not match or were empty. Please try again. > > Template: ejabberd/invaliduser > Type: error > _Description: Invalid administrator account username > The username you have typed contains forbidden characters. Please respect > the > JID syntax (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6122#appendix-A.5). If you used > a full JID (e.g. user@hostname), you have to use the same host name > you typed into the host name configuration step. "Hostname" again, and that URL redirects to HTTPS. While I'm changing that line I'd rephrase it to If you used a full JID (e.g. user@hostname), the hostname needs to match the one previously specified. > Template: ejabberd/invalidhostname > Type: error > _Description: Invalid hostname or special characters in hostname > The hostname which you have typed contains forbidden characters. Please > correct > the hostname entered. This starts by implying that having special characters in the hostname is just one of the things that can trigger the error, but then carries on as if it's the only possible diagnosis. Assuming that the problem might be, for instance, that I've typed in a thousand hyphens, it should probably be: _Description: Invalid hostname The hostname specified contains forbidden characters or is otherwise invalid. Please try again. -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english # team # # If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask # debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice. # # Even minor modifications require translation updates and such # changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers. Template: ejabberd/hostname Type: string Default: localhost _Description: Hostname for this Jabber server: Please enter a hostname for this Jabber server (lowercase). . If you would like to configure multiple hostnames for this server, you will have to do so manually in /etc/ejabberd/ejabberd.yml after installation. Template: ejabberd/user Type: string _Description: Jabber server administrator username: Please provide the name of an account to administrate the ejabberd server. After the installation of ejabberd, you can log in to this account using either any Jabber client or a web browser pointed at the administrative https://${hostname}:5280/admin/ interface. . You only need to enter the username part here (such as ${user}), but the full Jabber ID (such as ${user}@${hostname}) is required to access the ejabberd web interface. . Please leave this field empty if you don't want to create an administrator account automatically. Template: ejabberd/password Type: password _Description: Jabber server administrator password: Please enter the password for the administrative user. Template: ejabberd/verify Type: password _Description: Re-enter password to verify: Please enter the same administrator password again to verify that you have typed it correctly. Template: ejabberd/nomatch Type: error _Description: Password input error The two passwords you entered did not match or were empty. Please try again. Template: ejabberd/invaliduser Type: error _Description: Invalid administrator account username The username you have typed contains forbidden characters. Please respect the JID syntax (https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6122#appendix-A.5). If you used a full JID (e.g. user@hostname), the hostname needs to match the one previously specified. Template: ejabberd/invalidhostname Type: error _Description: Invalid hostname The hostname specified contains forbidden characters or is otherwise invalid. Please try again.
--- templates 2017-08-09 23:47:59.092771163 +0100 +++ templates.jbr 2017-08-10 00:07:33.958348649 +0100 @@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ Template: ejabberd/hostname Type: string Default: localhost -_Description: Host name for this Jabber server: - Please enter a host name for this Jabber server (lowercase). +_Description: Hostname for this Jabber server: + Please enter a hostname for this Jabber server (lowercase). . If you would like to configure multiple hostnames for this server, you will have to do so manually in /etc/ejabberd/ejabberd.yml after installation. @@ -20,10 +20,9 @@ Type: string _Description: Jabber server administrator username: Please provide the name of an account to administrate the ejabberd server. - After the installation of ejabberd you can use this account to log in with any - Jabber client to do administrative tasks or go to - https://${hostname}:5280/admin/ and log in with this account to enter the admin - interface. + After the installation of ejabberd, you can log in to this account using + either any Jabber client or a web browser pointed at the administrative + https://${hostname}:5280/admin/ interface. . You only need to enter the username part here (such as ${user}), but the full Jabber ID (such as ${user}@${hostname}) is required to @@ -51,13 +50,13 @@ Template: ejabberd/invaliduser Type: error _Description: Invalid administrator account username - The username you have typed contains forbidden characters. Please respect the - JID syntax (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6122#appendix-A.5). If you used - a full JID (e.g. user@hostname), you have to use the same host name - you typed into the host name configuration step. + The username you have typed contains forbidden characters. Please respect the + JID syntax (https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6122#appendix-A.5). If you used + a full JID (e.g. user@hostname), the hostname needs to match the one + previously specified. Template: ejabberd/invalidhostname Type: error -_Description: Invalid hostname or special characters in hostname - The hostname which you have typed contains forbidden characters. Please correct - the hostname entered. +_Description: Invalid hostname + The hostname specified contains forbidden characters or is otherwise + invalid. Please try again.
