Le 16 mars 2013 à 13:16, Sebastian Hilbert a écrit :
> Hi,
>
> Please consider the following changes.
>
> have to be checked « by-hand » --> has instead of have, manually instead of
> by-hand
ok
> There are no automated data-mining --> There is instead of are
ok
> some does not have any (or a weak) systemic passage --> some drugs do not ...
ok, changed to "some routes do not have"
> the engine analyses --> the engine analyzes ...
ok
>
> GnuMED --> GNUmed
ok
> Otherwise well done. Have a good time.
Thanks for your review. We also improved some parts of the text.
I've updated the PDF file
http://ericmaeker.fr/FreeMedForms/medetel_2013.pdf
Eric
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