2013/3/16 Eric Maeker <[email protected]>: > http://ericmaeker.fr/FreeMedForms/medetel_2013.pdf > > Thanks for your review and comments.
“Actually, the DDI engine” → “Currently, the DDI engine” <URL:http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/actually#Usage_notes> “Some development is actually started” → “Some development is currently underway” (or “has just been started” or so) “during three different moments” → “at three different moments” (because “during” indicates a period, while “moment” is instantaneous) “to avoid competing conflicts”: What is a “competing conflict”? Of less importance are: “require a user validation to pass through.” → “require a user validation to continue.” (because “to pass through” has a more physical meaning in my mind) “the DDI software of the project” → “the project’s DDI software” or maybe “FreeMedForms’ prescription module” Question: Does FreeMedForms use the same XML-based interface (as GNUmed) to communicate with FreeDiams? “implemented this interoperability.” → “implemented this interface.” Great job of telling the important things in such a concise manner (which I guess is the most important property of such a poster?). Nicolas -- A. Because it breaks the logical sequence of discussion. Q. Why is top posting bad? -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: http://lists.debian.org/cap-rdtaxrmwwh23xk3ubdvb_fcf3av3y2jhugnh_bvsrkft...@mail.gmail.com
