On Fri, 25 Nov 2011 10:43:39 -0800, peasthope wrote: > * From: Camaleón <[email protected]> * Date: Fri, 14 Oct 2011 > 17:22:00 +0000 (UTC) >> - Keep the uppercase for the first word in all of the points. Now some >> of the points start with uppercase and others with lowercase, this >> needs to be normalized :-) > > Worked over about 3/4 of the text where that applies. Tried to improve, > grammar, style and flow of concepts including use of lower and upper > case. Better? Worse? > > Will continue with the improvements you suggested as time is available.
Hey, it looks nicely formatted and more professional. Good job :-) Small glitch: there is a trailing parenthesis ")" at the end of the third point: *** · Do not submit attachments larger than 10kiB). *** I don't want to sound too picky but "KiB" (uppercase "K") is the correct symbol for "kibibyte" O:-) Greetings, -- Camaleón -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: http://lists.debian.org/[email protected]
