On Wed, Oct 08, 2003 at 07:09:08PM +0200, Martin Jansen wrote: > Index: keysigning.wml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /cvs/webwml/webwml/english/events/keysigning.wml,v > retrieving revision 1.8 > diff -u -r1.8 keysigning.wml > --- keysigning.wml 29 Sep 2003 19:05:07 -0000 1.8 > +++ keysigning.wml 8 Oct 2003 17:03:09 -0000 > @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ > <ol> > > <li>The key owner convinces the signer that the identity in the UID is > - indeed their own identity by whatever evidence the signer is > + indeed his/her own identity by whatever evidence the signer is > willing to accept as convincing. Usually this means the key owner > must present a government issued ID with a picture and information > that match up with the key owner. (Some signers know that
"their" is can be used for the third-person singular. > @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ > additional and/or alternative evidence of identity). > > <li>The key owner verifies that the fingerprint of the key about to be > - signed is indeed their own. > + signed is indeed his/her own. > > </ol> > Likewise. > @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ > gpg --keyserver keyring.debian.org --recv-keys 0xDEADBEEF > </pre> > > - <p>Note we can use the last eight hex digits of the key in this and > + <p>Note that we can use the last eight hex digits of the key in this and > other GnuPG operations. The <tt>0x</tt> in front is also > optional.</p> > > </li> OK. > @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ > > </li> > > -<li> Once you make sure everything went fine, you can send the signed key to > +<li> Once you have made sure everything went fine, you can send the signed > key to > its recipient by doing: > > <pre> I don't think this is necessary. > @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ > </pre> > > <p>The <code>-a</code> option exports the key in ASCII format so > it can > - be emailed without possibility of corruption.</p> > + be emailed without the possibility of corruption.</p> > > </li> > OK. Thanks for the corrections, I'll commit the ones I like this evening. If you disagree, please let me know why. -- Matt
