On Wed, Oct 08, 2003 at 10:39:13PM +0200, Gerfried Fuchs wrote:
> * Matt Kraai <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2003-10-08 10:44]:
> > On Wed, Oct 08, 2003 at 07:09:08PM +0200, Martin Jansen wrote:
> >> -<li> Once you make sure everything went fine, you can send the signed key 
> >> to
> >> +<li> Once you have made sure everything went fine, you can send the 
> >> signed key to
> >>       its recipient by doing:
> >>   
> >>  <pre>
> > 
> > I don't think this is necessary.
> 
>  But I guess it would be good to at least do s/make/made/, because it
> requires an "earlier" time than present time.

This looks like one of those cases where few native English speakers
would use textbook proper English but many non-native speakers, used to
a more precise language, find it confusing. Can I suggest the following:

  <li> Once everything looks good, you can send the signed key to

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James (Jay) Treacy
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