Derby Server and Administration Guide - Network Server security
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Key: DERBY-1207
URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207
Project: Derby
Type: Bug
Components: Documentation
Versions: 10.1.2.3
Environment: DITA-sourced documentation
Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
Priority: Minor
Fix For: 10.1.2.3
In this page is written:
1) A server that is started with the 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client
requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the
network.
-> 0.0.0.0 is the IP address, the option is -h, so in my opinion the sentence
should be:
A server that is started with the -h 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client
requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the
network.
2) In addition, administrative commands (for example,
org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl shutdown) can run only on the host
where the server was started, even if the server was started with the -h option.
-> In this sentence it seems to me that "However" is better than "In addition",
because what these sentence declares is an exception ("even if the server was
started with the -h option") of what is declared in the previous sentence, and
not a simple addition.
3) <p></p>
-> There a two empty paragraphs in the source file that can be removed.
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