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John H. Embretsen commented on DERBY-1194:
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Here is another suggestion which captures both interpretations of the sentence
"The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server,
with Derby as an embedded part of the application.":
"The Derby Network Server can either run stand-alone, that is as an independent
Java process embedding the Derby database engine, or embedded within another
Java application. In the latter ("embedded server") setting both the Network
Server framework and Derby are loaded by the Java application."
I still think it can be improved, but to me this seems clearer than the other
suggestions seen so far.
> Derby Server and Administration Guide - Managing the Derby Network Server
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>
> Key: DERBY-1194
> URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194
> Project: Derby
> Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Versions: 10.1.2.3
> Environment: DITA files
> Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
> Priority: Minor
> Attachments: cadminconfig86869.diff, cadminconfig86869.diff.html,
> cadminconfig86869.html, cadminconfig86869_a.diff,
> cadminconfig86869_a.diff.html
>
> In this manual is written:
> Managing the Derby Network Server
> The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an
> embedded part of the application.
> It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet
> interface. You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the
> command line, or the Network Server API. See Managing the Derby Network
> Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information about starting
> and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.
> It seems to me that the sentences of this last paragraph are not in the
> correct order, and the first and second sentences should be swapped,
> becoming:
> You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line,
> or the Network Server API. It can also be managed remotely from a web server
> by using a servlet interface. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely
> by using the servlet interface for information about starting and shutting
> down the Network Server using the servlet interface.
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