Miscellaneous copy-editting problems in the user guides
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Key: DERBY-1398
URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1398
Project: Derby
Type: Bug
Components: Documentation
Versions: 10.2.0.0
Reporter: Rick Hillegas
Fix For: 10.2.0.0
We should clean up these copy-editting problems:
Admin Guide
Update Copyrights in all docs
Part One...About this guide and the Network Server documentation
"and and" -> "and"
Part One...Accessing the Network Server by using the network client driver
retrieveMessageText: Is this synchronization cruft:
"...or when starting new units of work.
Part One...XA and the Network Server
We should say that the Derby Network Client is an example
of a compliant DRDA client which you can use for distributed
transactions.
Part One...Using the Derby ij tool with the Network Server
Do you really need the DRIVER command? Doesn't ij figure this
out by itself?
Part One...Differences between the embedded client and the network client
driver
These differences between network and embedded clients may need
revisiting:
* There are no localized error messages for the network client.
* The network client driver fully materializes LOBS when retrieving a row.
* To use an encrypted user id and password, you need to have the IBM's Java
Cryptography Extension (JCE) Version 1.2.1 or later.
Developer's Guide
Upgrade
Soft Upgrade
Soft upgrade allows you TO ...
Application development overview
last sentence "to serve AS..."
Derby server-side programming
Programming trigger actions
Examples of trigger actions
insert space between "the" and "flight_history"
Triggers and exceptions
"before to the statement" -> "before the statement"
Getting Started Guide
Installing and working with Derby
Installing Derby
"This downloads page includes provides" ->
"This downloads page provides"
Reference Guide
About this guide
How this guide is organized
"Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface include"
->
"Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface,
including"
JDBC Reference
java.sql.Blob and java.sql.Clob
I don't know what the following phrase means: "SQL extension over SQL"
Notes
"on the same column so could result"
->
"on the same column could result"
Working With Derby Guide
What next with Derby
"as your next step in leaning about"
->
"as your next step in learning about"
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