Le 2011-04-21 10:34, drew a écrit :
On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 10:30 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
Le 2011-04-20 21:20, drew a écrit :
Hi,
One more change to the label for the NA-Comm-DVD.
Addressed some concerns on trademark, from the US mktg ml.
Swapped SVG logo for one a bit more descriptive and moved a few things
around, per Marc's comments.
Removed overall green frame, except spine and updated the scatter
element to give it much more prominence.
Softened the sactter-esque watermark on back cover, and adjusted other
elements.
Updated the file on the wiki:
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case
Thanks
Drew
Thanks for update Drew. I was just wondering, what is the purpose of the
black dot under "English". Should this be erased?
huh - a beauty mark perhaps...*chuckle*...yeah, will excise that.
Thanks again for the excellent work on the label. Looks great! It will
make for a great template for other groups if they wish to adopt the
same label. I really like the scatter on the label
The only other criticism I would have is the slogan. I would suggest
moving the slogan moved beneath the LibreOffice title on the back page.
I am not sure if the marketing team has chosen an official slogan as of
yet, but this slogan seems to be the most quoted slogan from the list.
It does seem to exemplify our collective understanding of our distro.
It just seems to me that from a readability point of view that a user
would read LibreOffice -> Freedom Never Tasted So Suite more easily than
Freedom Never Tasted So Suite -> LibreOffice. It may also look a little
more presentable with the larger title of LibreOffice first followed by
the slogan underneath it.
(icon) LibreOffice
Freedom Never Tasted
So Suite!
What do you think?
Marc
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