On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 11:10 -0400, Marc Paré wrote: > Le 2011-04-21 10:34, drew a écrit : > > On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 10:30 -0400, Marc Paré wrote: > >> Le 2011-04-20 21:20, drew a écrit : > >>> Hi, > >>> > >>> One more change to the label for the NA-Comm-DVD. > >>> > >>> Addressed some concerns on trademark, from the US mktg ml. > >>> > >>> Swapped SVG logo for one a bit more descriptive and moved a few things > >>> around, per Marc's comments. > >>> > >>> Removed overall green frame, except spine and updated the scatter > >>> element to give it much more prominence. > >>> > >>> Softened the sactter-esque watermark on back cover, and adjusted other > >>> elements. > >>> > >>> Updated the file on the wiki: > >>> http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case > >>> > >>> Thanks > >>> > >>> Drew > >>> > >>> > >> > >> Thanks for update Drew. I was just wondering, what is the purpose of the > >> black dot under "English". Should this be erased? > > > > huh - a beauty mark perhaps...*chuckle*...yeah, will excise that. > > > > > > > > Thanks again for the excellent work on the label. Looks great! It will > make for a great template for other groups if they wish to adopt the > same label. I really like the scatter on the label > > The only other criticism I would have is the slogan. I would suggest > moving the slogan moved beneath the LibreOffice title on the back page.
<snip> > What do you think? Hi Marc, Did that, and the slogan just kept wanting to move south...so I accommodated it. After that, it just yelled at me to do something with the front...so I listened again. Finally, the ODF logo screamed so I borrowed from here and there, did a little aggregating and a little touch with the airbrush tool and well..see for yourself. http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case The source file is at: http://lo-portal.us/temp/na-dvd-case-04-11-22c.xcf "What do you think?" -> I think this is looking damned good now, thanks to all feedback. Also, that I need to move on to a jewel case layout. Best wishes, Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
