Hi Webmaster, (not sure what your name is) first, thanks for creating the brochures!
it would be cool if you could change the colour of the logo in the half-circle to Green 1 (or if that doesn't work because of contrast, another green) from https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Marketing/Branding#Color_Table Otherwise, we end up with a very ugly colour split between the half circle and the green body text. (The problem is that the colours we have on our website now have nothing to do with the defined LibreOffice colours – a situation which isn't great, but well, it has arisen – partly because the new website was designed without any input from the design list.) Some other issues I see: * I sense the cover page has a logo too many, so could you maybe try to remove the half circle image from there? Also, is it really necessary to have the half circle logo on every single page of the brochure? That seems very aggressive to me. * The cover page has the words "free office suite" on it twice – that's redundant * I am not sure what this is supposed to mean: "The TDF/LibreOffice Community – Fantastic Community." [seems redundant too] (it's on the page to the left of the cover) * imo, there is no need to capitalise all occurrences of "free" and "no" * the ≈'s between different parts of the brochure don't look very pretty to me, tbh – maybe you could just remove them and instead increase headline font size slightly? * another pattern of redundancy is in the feature descriptions of the individual modules: Writer ≈ Word Processing Writer ... How about removing the part before "Word Processing"? Does that help? Astron. -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/design/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
