Thanks Chris.  I didn't see the opening paragraph changes at first, looks like
they are at http://jsfiddle.net/agnCL/4/embedded/result/ though.

On 3/31/14 2:34 PM, Chris Tsai wrote:
> Looks good, made some minor edits, my version is here: 
> http://jsfiddle.net/agnCL/2/embedded/result/
> 
> Made a few style changes in the opening paragraph, italicizing forge instead 
> of double quotes and using an Oxford Comma in the short feature list. These 
> are both personal style preferences, so feel free to not incorporate those if 
> you feel strongly about them.
> 
> I made a change for the IRC link (split link to chat and archives). 
> Alternatively, for a more "user friendly" approach, we could link to the web 
> chat ( https://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=allura ), but I thought the 
> irc:// link would make more sense for the more tech-savvy audience of the 
> "Developers" section.
> 
> I considered separating the mailing list links as well (to "subscribe" and 
> "archives"), but then I realized the archive page has subscription 
> instructions on it already.
> 
> 
> --  
> Chris Tsai
> 
> 
> On Monday, March 31, 2014 at 2:01 PM, Dave Brondsema wrote:
> 
>> I've been working on content (no styling yet).
>> http://jsfiddle.net/mx6jm/5/embedded/result/ What do folks think? Anything
>> else we want on the page?
>>  
>> On 3/31/14 9:56 AM, Dave Brondsema wrote:
>>> Anyone interested? We need to do this so we have something to point to in 
>>> our
>>> press release. If not, I will see if I can put something together later 
>>> today.
>>>  
>>> On 3/28/14 11:33 AM, Dave Brondsema wrote:
>>>> Its looking like we need to make our own website for allura.apache.org 
>>>> (http://allura.apache.org) and not
>>>> just redirect to the wiki on our Allura forge instance.
>>>>  
>>>> Does someone want to make a quick single static page for us? If we can 
>>>> have it
>>>> done in a day or two that would be good, so we can have it completely 
>>>> ready by
>>>> Monday and finally do our press release about graduating.
>>>>  
>>>> Of course it should look nice (maybe bootstrap with a bit of theming?). 
>>>> It'll
>>>> need to have a lot of what we have on
>>>> https://forge-allura.apache.org/p/allura/wiki/Home/ right now. 
>>>> Specifically:
>>>>  
>>>> * title Apache Alluraâ„¢
>>>> * summary
>>>> * links to License, Sponsorship, Thanks, Security, apache.org 
>>>> (http://apache.org)
>>>> * apache logo
>>>> * allura download links
>>>> * footer copyright & trademark lines
>>>> * link to docs, forge wiki, code, tickets, mailing list, etc - maybe group 
>>>> into
>>>> sections for users/installers vs devs
>>>>  
>>>> We do have the option to use the Apache CMS (a static site generator) 
>>>> which I
>>>> think may be useful long-term but will have an initial learning curve.
>>>> https://www.apache.org/dev/cmsref.html
>>>>  
>>>> I can work with infrastructure to get the SVN repo that'll hold the site 
>>>> all
>>>> squared away.
>>>>  
>>>> Thanks!
>>  
>>  
>>  
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