Github user geomacy commented on a diff in the pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/brooklyn-docs/pull/137#discussion_r94742789
  
    --- Diff: guide/yaml/advanced-example.md ---
    @@ -28,83 +28,108 @@ For more about the ELK stack, please see the 
documentation [here](https://www.el
     
     There are four blueprints that make up this application. Each of them are 
used to add one or more catalog items to Brooklyn. You can find them below:
     
    -* [Elasticsearch](example_yaml/brooklyn-elasticsearch-catalog.bom)
    -* [Logstash](example_yaml/brooklyn-logstash-catalog.bom)
    -* [Kibana](example_yaml/brooklyn-kibana-catalog.bom)
    -* [ELK](example_yaml/brooklyn-elk-catalog.bom)
    +* 
[Elasticsearch](https://github.com/brooklyncentral/brooklyn-elk/blob/master/brooklyn-elasticsearch-catalog.bom)
    +* 
[Logstash](https://github.com/brooklyncentral/brooklyn-elk/blob/master/brooklyn-logstash-catalog.bom)
    +* 
[Kibana](https://github.com/brooklyncentral/brooklyn-elk/blob/master/brooklyn-kibana-catalog.bom)
    +* 
[ELK](https://github.com/brooklyncentral/brooklyn-elk/blob/master/brooklyn-elk-catalog.bom)
     
     #### Running the example
    -First, add all four blueprints to the Brooklyn Catalog. This can be done 
by clicking the 'Catalog' tab, clicking the '+' symbol and pasting the YAML. 
Once this is done, click the 'Application' tab, then the '+' button to bring up 
the add application wizard. A new Catalog application will be available called 
'ELK Stack'. Using the add application wizard, you should be able to deploy an 
ELK stack to a location of your choosing.
    +First, add all four blueprints to the Brooklyn Catalog. This can be done 
by clicking the 'Catalog' tab, clicking the '+'
    + symbol and pasting the YAML. Once this is done, click the 'Application' 
tab, then the '+' button to bring up the add 
    +application wizard. A new Catalog application will be available called 
'ELK Stack'. Using the add application wizard, 
    +you should be able to deploy an ELK stack to a location of your choosing.  
Alternatively use the `br` Brooklyn
    +command line tool and add the files with `br catalog add`.
     
     #### Exploring the example
     After the application has been deployed, you can ensure it is working as 
expected by checking the following:
     
    -* There is a Kibana sensor called `main.uri`, the value of which points to 
the Kibana front end. You can explore this front end, and observe the logs 
stored in Elasticsearch. Many Brooklyn applications have a `main.uri` set to 
point you in the right direction.
    -* You can also use the Elasticsearch REST API to explore further. The 
Elasticsearch Cluster entity has a `urls.http.list` sensor. Using a host:port 
from that list you will be able to access the REST API. The following URL will 
give you the state of the cluster 
`http://<host:port>/_cluster/health?pretty=true`. As you can see the 
`number_of_nodes` is currently 2, indicating that the Elasticsearch nodes are 
communicating with each other.
    +* There is a Kibana sensor called `main.uri`, the value of which points to 
the Kibana front end. You can explore this 
    +front end, and observe the logs stored in Elasticsearch. Many Brooklyn 
applications have a `main.uri` set to point you 
    +in the right direction.
    +* You can also use the Elasticsearch REST API to explore further. The 
Elasticsearch Cluster entity has a `urls.http.list` 
    +sensor. Using a host:port from that list you will be able to access the 
REST API. The following URL will give you the 
    +state of the cluster `http://<host:port>/_cluster/health?pretty=true`. As 
you can see the `number_of_nodes` is 
    +currently 2, indicating that the Elasticsearch nodes are communicating 
with each other.
     
     ### Interesting Feature Spotlight
    -We will mainly focus on the Elasticsearch blueprint, and will be clear 
when another blueprint is being discussed. This blueprint describes a cluster 
of Elasticsearch nodes. Clustering is a useful technique that is explained in 
more depth [here]({{site.path.guide}}/yaml/clusters.html).
    +We will mainly focus on the Elasticsearch blueprint, and will be clear 
when another blueprint is being discussed. This blueprint describes a cluster 
of Elasticsearch nodes. 
     
     #### Provisioning Properties
    -Our Elasticsearch blueprint has a few requirements of the location in 
which it is run. Firstly, it must be run on an Ubuntu machine as the example 
has been written specifically for this OS. Secondly, two ports must opened to 
ensure that the entities can be accessed from the outside world. Both of these 
requirements are configured via provisioning.properties as follows:
    +Our Elasticsearch blueprint has a few requirements of the location in 
which it is run. Firstly, it must be run on an
    + Ubuntu machine as the example has been written specifically for this OS. 
Secondly, two ports must opened to ensure
    +  that the entities can be accessed from the outside world. Both of these 
requirements are configured via provisioning
    +  .properties as follows:
     
     ~~~yaml
    -provisioning.properties:
    -  osFamily: ubuntu
    -  inboundPorts:
    +brooklyn.config:
    +  elasticsearch.http.port: 9220
    +  elasticsearch.tcp.port: 9330
    +  provisioning.properties:
    +    osFamily: ubuntu
    +    inboundPorts:
         - $brooklyn:config("elasticsearch.http.port")
         - $brooklyn:config("elasticsearch.tcp.port")
     ~~~
     
     #### VanillaSoftwareProcess
    -When composing a YAML blueprint, the VanillaSoftwareProcess is a very 
useful entity to be aware of. A VanillaSoftwareProcess will instruct Brooklyn 
to provision an instance, and run a series of shell commands to setup, run, 
monitor and teardown your program. The commands are specified as configuration 
on the VanillaSoftwareProcess and there are several available. We will 
spotlight a few now. To simplify this blueprint, we have specified ubuntu only 
installs so that our commands can be tailored to this system (e.g. use apt-get 
rather than yum).
    +When composing a YAML blueprint, the VanillaSoftwareProcess is a very 
useful entity to be aware of. 
    +A VanillaSoftwareProcess will instruct Brooklyn to provision an instance, 
and run a series of shell 
    +commands to setup, run, monitor and teardown your program. The commands 
are specified as configuration 
    +on the VanillaSoftwareProcess and there are several available. We will 
spotlight a few now. To simplify
    + this blueprint, we have specified ubuntu only installs so that our 
commands can be tailored to this 
    + system (e.g. use apt-get rather than yum).
     
     ##### Customize Command
    -The Customize Command is run after the application has been installed but 
before it is run. It is the perfect place to create and amend config files. 
Please refer to the following section of the Elasticsearch blueprint:
    +The Customize Command is run after the application has been installed but 
before it is run. It is the perfect
    + place to create and amend config files. Please refer to the following 
section of the Elasticsearch blueprint:
     
     ~~~yaml
     customize.command: |
    -  $brooklyn:formatString("
    -  sudo rm -fr sudo tee /etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml;
    -  echo discovery.zen.ping.multicast.enabled: false | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml;
    -  echo discovery.zen.ping.unicast.enabled: true | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml;
    -  echo 'discovery.zen.ping.unicast.hosts: %s' | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml;
    -  echo http.port: %s | sudo tee -a /etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml;
    -  echo transport.tcp.port: %s | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml;
    -  ",
    -  $brooklyn:component("parent", 
"").attributeWhenReady("urls.tcp.withBrackets"),
    -  $brooklyn:config("elasticsearch.http.port"),
    -  $brooklyn:config("elasticsearch.tcp.port")
    -  )
    +  sudo rm -fr sudo tee /etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml
    +  echo discovery.zen.ping.multicast.enabled: false | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml
    +  echo discovery.zen.ping.unicast.enabled: true | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml
    +  echo discovery.zen.ping.unicast.hosts: ${URLS_WITH_BRACKETS} | sudo tee 
-a /etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml
    +  echo http.port: ${ES_HTTP_PORT} | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml
    +  echo transport.tcp.port: ${ES_TCP_PORT} | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml
    +  echo network.host: ${IP_ADDRESS} | sudo tee -a 
/etc/elasticsearch/elasticsearch.yml
     ~~~
    -The purpose of this section is to create a YAML file with all of the 
required configuration. We use the YAML literal style `|` indicator to write a 
multi line command. We then use `$brooklyn:formatString` notation to build the 
string from configuration. We start our series of commands by using the `rm` 
command to remove the previous config file. We then use `echo` and `tee` to 
create the new config file and insert the config. Part of the configuration is 
a list of all hosts that is set on the parent entity- this is done by using a 
combination of the `component` and  `attributeWhenReady` DSL commands. More on 
how this is generated later.
    +The purpose of this section is to create a YAML file with all of the 
required configuration. We use the YAML 
    +literal style `|` indicator to write a multi line command. We then use 
`$brooklyn:formatString` notation to 
    --- End diff --
    
    Need to delete the sentence about 'formatString', it's not used now. 


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