Copilot commented on code in PR #530: URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/530#discussion_r2276662195
########## source/installguide/hypervisor/vsphere.rst: ########## @@ -223,9 +223,7 @@ vSphere Installation Steps ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ #. If you haven't already, you'll need to download and purchase vSphere - from the VMware Website - (`https://www.vmware.com/tryvmware/index.php?p=vmware-vsphere&lp=1 <https://www.vmware.com/tryvmware/index.php?p=vmware-vsphere&lp=1>`_) - and install it by following the VMware vSphere Installation Guide. + from the VMware/Broadcom Website and install it by following the VMware vSphere Installation Guide. Review Comment: The generic reference 'VMware/Broadcom Website' is vague and doesn't provide users with actionable information. Consider providing the actual URL to the Broadcom VMware portal or at least mentioning 'support.broadcom.com' for better user guidance. ```suggestion from the Broadcom VMware portal (https://support.broadcom.com) and install it by following the VMware vSphere Installation Guide. ``` ########## source/installguide/hypervisor/vsphere.rst: ########## @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Requirements" <http://pubs.vmware.com/vsp40/wwhelp/wwhimpl/js/html/wwhelp.htm#hr Other requirements: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -- VMware vCenter Standard Edition 6.0, 6.5 or 6.7 must be installed and +- VMware vCenter Standard Edition 6.0, 6.5, 6.7, or 7.0 must be installed and Review Comment: The title mentions 7.0.3 snapshots but the documentation only mentions 7.0. Consider being more specific about which 7.0.x versions are supported or clarify if all 7.0.x versions are supported. ```suggestion - VMware vCenter Standard Edition 6.0, 6.5, 6.7, or 7.0.x (including 7.0.1, 7.0.2, 7.0.3) must be installed and ``` -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@cloudstack.apache.org For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org
