Hi Rich, On Fri, Aug 8, 2014 at 2:59 PM, Rich Bowen <rbo...@rcbowen.com> wrote: > ...Read titles and abstracts. Can they be improved?...
I just stumbled on [1] which says "Apache DeviceMap is a collaborative effort by Adobe, OpenDDR and others" which is wrong - Apache projects are never collaborations between companies and organizations, they are driven by individuals (I know you know that Rich, just being extra clear ;-) I suggest replacing that with "Apache DeviceMap is a collaborative effort to create a comprehensive...". Ccing Werner in case he's got a better suggestion that respects the ASF's neutrality. The "later that year OpenDDR contributed DDR APis for Java and. NET" bit is ok, it's factual. Thanks! -Bertrand (DeviceMap incubation mentor) [1] http://apacheconeu2014.sched.org/event/096b8f5178467c494b9348e857cf3bef#.VCvYtimSyRM
