I'm actually already conversing with Werner about exactly this issue. On Oct 1, 2014 7:48 AM, "Bertrand Delacretaz" <bdelacre...@apache.org> wrote:
> Hi Rich, > > On Fri, Aug 8, 2014 at 2:59 PM, Rich Bowen <rbo...@rcbowen.com> wrote: > > ...Read titles and abstracts. Can they be improved?... > > I just stumbled on [1] which says "Apache DeviceMap is a collaborative > effort by Adobe, OpenDDR and others" which is wrong - Apache projects > are never collaborations between companies and organizations, they are > driven by individuals (I know you know that Rich, just being extra > clear ;-) > > I suggest replacing that with "Apache DeviceMap is a collaborative > effort to create a comprehensive...". > > Ccing Werner in case he's got a better suggestion that respects the > ASF's neutrality. > > The "later that year OpenDDR contributed DDR APis for Java and. NET" > bit is ok, it's factual. > > Thanks! > -Bertrand (DeviceMap incubation mentor) > > > [1] > http://apacheconeu2014.sched.org/event/096b8f5178467c494b9348e857cf3bef#.VCvYtimSyRM >
