Need a period after "...and TVs)". If the first sentence is a sentence, and not the headline, then it needs a period also.
Otherwise, it looks great! I can't wait. On Sat, Jan 31, 2015 at 2:44 PM, OmPrakash Muppirala <omup...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > > Please review the draft announcement for 4.14.0. The same will go out as a > post on our blog as well. > > Thanks, > Om > > ============BEGIN DRAFT================ > > The Apache Flex community is pleased to announce the release of Apache Flex > SDK 4.14.0 > > The Apache Flex SDK is a highly productive, open source application > framework > for building and maintaining expressive applications that deploy > consistently > on all major browsers, desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets > and TVs) > > Apache Flex SDK 4.14.0 is an update to Apache Flex SDK 4.13.0 that adds > support for the following: > > - iOS 7+ and Android 4.x+ mobile theme support > <https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/x/7AAIAw> > <https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/x/7AAIAw> > - New Spark components skin: FlatSpark > <https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/x/wQEIAw> > - Spark RichTextEditor > - Native support for tables in TLF > - Promises/A+ <https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/x/cIH_Ag> > - AIR 16 and Flash Player 16 Support > - Several bug fixes > > For more details, see the release notes at: > http://www.apache.org/dist/flex/4.14.0/RELEASE_NOTES > > The Apache Flex SDK is available in source form from the following download > page: > http://flex.apache.org/download-source.html > > It is recommended that you install the Apache Flex SDK by using the Apache > Flex SDK Installer: > http://flex.apache.org/installer.html > > When downloading from a mirror site, please remember to verify the > downloads > using signatures or MD5 hashes. > > For more information on Apache Flex, visit the project home page: > http://flex.apache.org > > Thank you for using Apache Flex! > The Apache Flex Community > > ============END DRAFT================ > -- Andrew Wetmore http://cottage14.blogspot.com/ http://portfolio.cottage14.com http://annapolisndp.ca
