Ross Gardler wrote:
David Crossley wrote:

Johannes Schaefer wrote:

Now that David gave the last version,
I'll try to comment ... also dared a look
into the archive.

HERE'S MY TRY:
Apache Forrest is a publishing framework that accepts
various input sources and transforms them into a unified
document collection strictly separating content and
presentation.
It is standards-based, employing Apache Cocoon and
a plugin architecture which makes it modular and
extensible.
Forrest can be used as a dynamic application,
to generate a static result or completely automated.


...

Brilliant work. I would only tweak the last sentence
to have better words than "static result" and the
"completely automated" seems to lose some of the meaning.


I agree (sorry little time at present so I can't make a suggestion).

What do others think? I reckon that we are getting close.


Minor point:

I read that the *output* strictly separates content from presentation,
thereby implying that the *input* does not. Whilst some input formats
blur this distinction (like OOo and MS Office for example) I'm not sure
we can claim to take a horrible mess of an input document and create a
nicely separated output.

fast as well: I meant the separation of concerns for the *framework*, not only the *output*. Maybe some commas would help (relative clause from "that" to "collection")? Or like this: >>>Apache Forrest is a publishing framework <snip> strictly >>>separating content and presentation. It accepts >>> various input sources and transforms them into a unified >>> document collection.

This is where my English fails :-(

js



Ross




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