William,
NIce-looking mockup. I'm still concerned that all the links appear "below
the fold." Other than that, my observations are proofreader's nit-picks.
For example, let's spell "shared-nothing" consistently. The term appears
sometimes with a hyphen, sometimes without. I like it with, but will defer
to you, as long as it's the same everywhere.
I have some other suggestions on tighter wording which I can discuss with
you when we're both in the office.
Thanks,
-Dave


On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 2:55 PM, William Markito <[email protected]> wrote:

> Here it is - http://markito.github.io/geode-website/
>
> It may still have some small glitches due my poor port to gh-pages but it
> may already a better idea.
>
> On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 1:50 PM, Roman Shaposhnik <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
> > On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 11:18 AM, William Markito <[email protected]>
> > wrote:
> > > Here is what I have after some work on Friday and Saturday morning,
> based
> > > on the Apache Usergrid design...
> > >
> > > Text and content still need to be polished and could use what Greg
> > already
> > > collected in our wiki plus any other feedback we may have.
> > >
> > > Link: http://imgur.com/a/cnXSG
> > >
> > > Source and instructions are currently here:
> > > https://github.com/markito/geode-website/tree/master/website
> >
> > Any chance you can push it into gh-pages branch so we
> > can see it live?
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Roman.
> >
>
>
>
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>
> William Markito Oliveira
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