Thanks for the feedback Dave! Hopefully, if people decide to proceed with this layout we can crowdsource the content and fix these and other typos as well..
On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 8:29 PM, Dave Barnes <[email protected]> wrote: > William, > NIce-looking mockup. I'm still concerned that all the links appear "below > the fold." Other than that, my observations are proofreader's nit-picks. > For example, let's spell "shared-nothing" consistently. The term appears > sometimes with a hyphen, sometimes without. I like it with, but will defer > to you, as long as it's the same everywhere. > I have some other suggestions on tighter wording which I can discuss with > you when we're both in the office. > Thanks, > -Dave > > > On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 2:55 PM, William Markito <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > Here it is - http://markito.github.io/geode-website/ > > > > It may still have some small glitches due my poor port to gh-pages but it > > may already a better idea. > > > > On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 1:50 PM, Roman Shaposhnik <[email protected]> > > wrote: > > > > > On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 11:18 AM, William Markito <[email protected]> > > > wrote: > > > > Here is what I have after some work on Friday and Saturday morning, > > based > > > > on the Apache Usergrid design... > > > > > > > > Text and content still need to be polished and could use what Greg > > > already > > > > collected in our wiki plus any other feedback we may have. > > > > > > > > Link: http://imgur.com/a/cnXSG > > > > > > > > Source and instructions are currently here: > > > > https://github.com/markito/geode-website/tree/master/website > > > > > > Any chance you can push it into gh-pages branch so we > > > can see it live? > > > > > > Thanks, > > > Roman. > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > > William Markito Oliveira > > -- For questions about Apache Geode, please write to > > *[email protected] > > <[email protected]>* > > > -- William Markito Oliveira -- For questions about Apache Geode, please write to *[email protected] <[email protected]>*
