On Sun, 2006-05-14 at 15:25 +0900, Yutaka Kachi wrote:
> Hi, all.
> 
> I wrote a document to describe OpenSource although it might does not
> relate directly to OpenOffice.org. This is the document to help people
> in general who are not computer experts to understand the OpenSource's
> way of thinking.
> 
>  http://www.catch.jp/openoffice/whats_oss/index_en.html
> 
> I do hope you will read it and let me know your opinion. And please give
> me your advice when you find incorrect expressions in the document and
> know better expressions.

Great for children, Catch! I'm a bit reluctant to correct the English
because as it is makes the reader more aware of the origin.

> This was originally written in Japanese. The translator of this document
> is not a native speaker. I think there are unnatural or unclear
> expressions. Please help me to improve English quality of this document.

I'll E-mail you a "correct" English version but I'm inclined to say you
should just leave it as it is.

> Thank you for your cooperation.
-- 
Ian Lynch
www.theINGOTs.org
www.opendocumentfellowship.org
www.schoolforge.org.uk


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