how about something like this: "Upgrade your business to Open" or "Upgrade. Open. Profit" or "Open Upgrade. Free Profit"
viktor -----Original Message----- From: Paul F. Olson [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Saturday, December 15, 2007 5:50 AM To: [email protected] Subject: Re: [Marketing] Re: Website Upgrade Marketing Input My problem is, I like too many of these things. "Open. For Business" is way too good -- though, I agree, this may not be the exact place for it. "Your Next Office Upgrade" is likewise excellent, and is maybe better suited for this. I woke up with something else rattling around in my head: "Productivity Is Just A Click Away" with perhaps the word "Click" actually being the button linking to the download page. Or maybe the same idea, but a different phrase: "Your Next Office Upgrade Is Just A Click Away." Productivity is always a selling point for me, but in this usage, "your next office upgrade" certainly does a better job of explaining what's going on. I'm just not sure that what needs to be accomplished can really be done in one line. As suggested, you may need the two- or three-line approach. Looking for your next office upgrade? Download OpenOffice.org Productivity is just a click away Fourteen words, not eight. :( Paul -- Paul F. Olson http://paulfolson.com --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
