Thank you Anne; I have committed your corrections with rev. 1295109
The site should publish them in about 1 hour.
Jacopo
On Feb 29, 2012, at 6:56 AM, Anne wrote:
> I can't find a way to log in and change it myself, but my suggested
> edits are trivial:
>
> "where YY and MM are the year and month of when the release branch was
> created"
> should be
> "where YY and MM are the year and month the release branch was created"
> (drop "of when")
>
> "Major Release Number is created every year on April"
> should be
> "Major Release Number is created every year in April"
> ("on" becomes "in")
>
> "<Minor Release Number> is a two digits sequential number"
> should be
> "<Minor Release Number> is a two digit sequential number"
> (singular, not plural, for "digit")
>
> Cheers,
> Anne.
>
>
> On 27 February 2012 00:46, Jacopo Cappellato
> <[email protected]> wrote:
>> This is mainly a request for committers that are native English speaker:
>> today I have edited/cleaned a lot of information in the download page:
>>
>> http://ofbiz.apache.org/download.html
>>
>> could you please review what I wrote and improve the English?
>>
>> Thank you,
>>
>> Jacopo
>>
>
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