On Fri, 31 May 2013 15:10:56 +0200 Andre Fischer <awf....@gmail.com> wrote:
> I am writing a blog post about the sidebar. Please have a look at [1]. > Any comments are welcome. Some spelling/grammatical/meaning corrections: Para "The third group": 'changes where necessary' > 'changes were necessary' (spelling) Para "The core implementation": OMIT 'that is' (redundant) Para "The sidebar is": CHANGE 'may no (not yet) panel' > 'may not yet be a panel' (better phrasing) Para "The deck that": CHANGE 'the user, you, is currently' > 'the user is currently' OR "you are currently' (better phrasing) Same Para: UI is undefined (ambiguity for non computer literate reader) Same Para: CHANGE 'at the same time makes' > 'at the same time making' (corrects change of verb tense) Para "The OpenOffice.org name": CHANGE 'to difficult' > 'too difficult' (spelling) Para "The name "sidebar"": CHANGE 'every' > 'ever' (spelling) Para "Up to now": UXers is undefined. (ambiguity for non computer literate reader - should it be User Experience testers or Users?) Para "Like in toolbars": CHANGE 'Like in toolbars' > 'As in toolbars' (better phrasing) Same Para, first bullet point: CHANGE 'adavantage' > 'advantage' (spelling) Same Para: INSERT 'of most screens' > 'of most modern screens' (better description) Para: "A little known feature": CHANGE 'are extensions' > 'is the extensions' (grammatical error) Para: "You can add": CHANGE 'changes like for example changes in the selection' > 'changes such as different selections" (better phrasing, avoids multiple use of word 'changes') Para: "The toolbars and dialogs like": CHANGE 'like' > 'such as' (better phrasing) Para: "OpenOffice is an": INSERT 'We don't want youyr money." > 'We don't want your money, but if you wish to makre a donation <link to donatipon site>' (Good strategy not to miss possible donations) -- Rory O'Farrell <ofarr...@iol.ie> --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org
